Preliminary exercise learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Teachers feedback Good preliminary exercise – 42 seconds and some really nice shots in there. Camerawork is a strength – some nice framing and camera movement. Perhaps a little more movement could work since it’s a music video? Or perhaps slightly pacier editing in places? Generally the pace is good though. Location and weather (too sunny!) perhaps hold this back a little? I wonder if effects could help with this. Did you try slow motion or black and white? You definitely need another scene / location / performance element for the full video. Needed brand identity of your artist in there – that was part of the brief for the preliminary exercise. Student feedback WWW * I like the camera movement and angles. * Good shot angles/ varieties. * Good natural lighting * Good variety of shots/ Close-ups were good. * Good acting. * Liked the shadow shot/ Liked match o